get excited..

Sorry guys, it's been a busy past few days. All I have to offer is a few short sentences from what will hopefully become an epic story. As can be seen, this is obviously the beginning of said story...where it ends, I have no idea. Any suggestions?

Daring to open my eyes, all I saw below me was a dense cloud of grey mist, the cold spray rising to beat me in the face. I heard the rumble of a waterfall echo in the distance below. I knew what this was, I knew exactly what this was: it was a bottomless chasm of doom. Why was I here? This was a question of the utmost importance.

Looking up, I aw my hand clenched with the ferocity of a small, angry, child to the arm of another person. Following the arm that was presumably attached to a human being somewhere, I was surprised to see the placid, slightly depressed, face of a boy. Was he wearing eyeliner? I think he might have looked at me, but his unnaturally-black hair obscured his face. But not even all his hair- the back was short- these were side bangs. This warranted yet another paramount question: how did this emo kid catch me from falling into said chasm of doom

~Abby